Kidd Wadsworth
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I've been reading Tim Ferriss's fantastic book The 4-Hour Chef. Although Tim's book presents as a cookbook, it is instead a manual which teaches the reader how to learn anything rapidly. One learning technique Tim recommends is the creation of a "One-Pager." On one page he attempts to write down the most important concepts he must grasp to master a skill. I have borrowed Tim's idea, and created this One-Pager for fiction writing.
Hope it helps you on your writing journey,
Kidd
#1: Theme
The Theme is the lesson the reader learns from living the story through the eyes of the protagonist. Example: The Grinch: There is more to Christmas than gifts. You should be able to write down the theme of your work. The theme of a story is always tied to the protagonist’s internal conflict.
#2: Interior and Exterior Conflict
Ext. Conflict --> Compels hero to face -->Int. Conflict
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The protagonist begins the story with an interior conflict. The resolution of this conflict—or lack of —conveys the theme of the story.'
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Every event in the external conflict must impact the protagonist’s internal struggle. Example: Each of the three ghosts who haunted Scrooge forced him to examine his meaningless, miserable life.
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The exterior conflict must be overwhelming because the protagonist will not willingly face his/her own interior struggle. Think dragons or robots from the future, not misunderstandings.
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If an event does not touch upon the protagonist’s interior struggle the reader will STOP reading.
#5: Other Stuff
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Use all five senses. Smell is the most powerful. Use it to evoke memories, to scare, to warn, to indicate joy or bliss, to convey the extraordinary.
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Use juicy words.
Writing Essentials
by Kidd Wadsworth
#3: Show Don’t Tell
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Reveal the story—and emotion—through action. Show what each character is doing.
She banged her head against the door. Not: she was frustrated.
He strolled along, lifting his chin, feeling the warmth of the sun on his face. Not: He walked slowly.
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Remember: writing “She thought” or “He thought” is telling.
#4: Pacing
(from Save the Cat! Writes a Novel)
1% Opening Image (Act I)
5% Theme Stated
10% Catalyst
20% Upside-down world (Act II)
50% Midpoint (stakes go up!)
50-70% Bad guys close in
75% All is lost
80% Dark night of the soul
80+% Breakthrough (Act III)
80-99% Finale
100% Final Image (Dénouement)
(% indicates location in the novel. For a 120-page novel, 20% is p.24)